Designs 1 Value – both of these are very interesting. Watch your corners A Design 2 shape – there is a flux between the line and the shape. The bottom is very strong – a sense of horizon line and therefore shape Design 3 line – I think the top is an implied shape not necessary a line. Although you did it as an outline an implied shape pops forward. Design 4 texture – these are a great beginning – I want to see them smaller and more. Letters in the first one – there is too little to show the contrast from texture to no texture – too container to emphasize the contrast The bottom is excellent Design 5 size – I think they are great . You have to see the blob in reference to the frame. Or something it Design 6 direction these are both strong and dynamic – I would like a bit more variety in size – even bigger and thicker
Excellent - like the roughs and the letters
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Designs 1 Value – both of these are very interesting. Watch your corners A
ReplyDeleteDesign 2 shape – there is a flux between the line and the shape. The bottom is very strong – a sense of horizon line and therefore shape
Design 3 line – I think the top is an implied shape not necessary a line. Although you did it as an outline an implied shape pops forward.
Design 4 texture – these are a great beginning – I want to see them smaller and more. Letters in the first one – there is too little to show the contrast from texture to no texture – too container to emphasize the contrast The bottom is excellent
Design 5 size – I think they are great . You have to see the blob in reference to the frame. Or something it
Design 6 direction these are both strong and dynamic – I would like a bit more variety in size – even bigger and thicker