WORD1: A very topical visualization, especially with regards to the earthquake in Japan. I am not sure about the bottom. There is probably too much explosion marks – a need to really shift the value some. The blacks that are created by the overlapping of the words . As you can tell what I say does not necessarily right – stay with your gut. You did well WORD2: Bully – this work really represents the notion of bully – the way the BIG T is actually quite good spacing. I get the feeling that the T is being pushed down as pressure. I think this is a quirky. The overlapping of the letter as they link to create a kind of scaffolding.
Looking back on 'Word2', I actually take back what I said on my critique. I guess it is pretty interesting with the way that you didn't make the 'T' cover the whole page. It certainly does make my eyes focus on the 'T' just because of that. Very 'original'
WORD1: A very topical visualization, especially with regards to the earthquake in Japan. I am not sure about the bottom. There is probably too much explosion marks – a need to really shift the value some. The blacks that are created by the overlapping of the words . As you can tell what I say does not necessarily right – stay with your gut. You did well
ReplyDeleteWORD2: Bully – this work really represents the notion of bully – the way the BIG T is actually quite good spacing. I get the feeling that the T is being pushed down as pressure. I think this is a quirky. The overlapping of the letter as they link to create a kind of scaffolding.
Looking back on 'Word2', I actually take back what I said on my critique.
ReplyDeleteI guess it is pretty interesting with the way that you didn't make the 'T' cover the whole page.
It certainly does make my eyes focus on the 'T' just because of that.
Very 'original'